पाँच हाईकु

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Gyanendra Rai   21st Sep 2014   Haiku(हाईकु) 2 comments   Like ( 0)   3750 reads  

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पाँच हाईकु

१.
दन्ते कथा
एकादेशको
संविधान बन्ने छ

२.
हराएको मान्छे
भेट्याएको साथ
नछुट्ने बाचा

३.
एउटै शब्द
मनलाई काट्ने
धारिलो हतियार भएछ

४.
लग्यो बगाएर,
आशाको पहाड
शब्दको भेलले ।

५.
रुप बदल्ने
धनाढ्य
सुकुम्वासीहरु ।




COMMENTS
Dhal Bahadur Jirel 'Ravi'   30th Sep 2014
None of these are haiku. Pls surf internet or read books on haiku. Wishes from DB
Gyanendra Rai   14th Oct 2014
Thanx a lot Dhal Bahadur Ji for your more valuable comment, you are absolutely correct. I am not a writer, but I have just tried to write.....
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